I hope there is a 2nd book. That other commenter can Glurp Glurp
Likes:
- Story and environment building in the beginning of many chapters and how they transition was a nice techniqie. Works very well with the SBT sound effects.
- Good use of super powers. Some fairly unique stuff. No power used in an OP way.
- The doctor was written surprisingly well.
- light harem, lots of personality with the characters, even a tragic hero arc.
- for more fast paced story, it's done well.
Dislikes:
- I feel the Doctors Formula + Explosion needs more explaining. It's a huge point in the story but it wasn't explained why it worked at all.
- I didn't know energy weapons existed until the last few chapters. Felt un introduced but Tech was implied once earlier.
Oh, and that other commenter with the 2 x 1 star reviews can go suck it. They sound like a 12 year old who doesn't know commen business. Glurp Glurp MF.
The narrator sounds like he always does. Actually he shoulds a little better to me here since I'm used to hearing him play in Boxy and a few others.